•In your own words, state the theme of the writing
•Does the author have sufficient detail? IF not, where does it need to be added/ Be specific and GIVE SUGGESTIONS!
•Where can dialogue be added?
•What extended metaphors and similes can you add?
•What aspects of the writing are done well and why? What most needs improved?
AVOID THESE
1. "There" followed by a boring verb
2. "You" being used
3. "Would" and forms of the past tense
4. "ALOT" "Things" or "stuff"
5. Sentences taht begin with "it" "this/these" "but" "and" "for"
6. Trite, overused expressions
7. Boring, unneccesary writing
8. Unoriginal ideas
9. Slang or swear words
10. run ons, fragments
Good luck!
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